cathybites: (2 minutes for slashing)
cathybites ([personal profile] cathybites) wrote2010-03-12 01:42 am

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keep your hands to yourself
[rps, jared/jensen, nc-17, 720 words]

written for [livejournal.com profile] salt_burn_porn, with the prompt 'WAIT YOUR TURN' from [livejournal.com profile] __tiana__. unbetaed because I had no real time to write this. ALAS. I'd almost forgotten how this all is supposed to go.



Jared sits on his hands. Pushes down on them, concentrates on the scrape of denim against the back of them. His fingers curl into his palms slowly, knuckles creaking under his weight. And still, it takes every ounce of self-control not to reach out, not to touch. He shifts in his seat and tries to remember to breathe, watching Jensen as he peels his shirt off.

The shirt flies into a corner, and Jensen smiles at him, a smoldering curve of his mouth as he saunters over. He stops inches away from Jared, so close that Jared can almost taste the sweat that gleams on Jensen's skin. Jared breathes in, a slow inhale that twists sharp as Jensen runs a hand down his own stomach, fingertips dancing at his waistband.

Jared forgets and he reaches out. Before he can make contact, Jensen smacks his hand away and steps back, shaking his head. "Uh-uh, no you don't. You wait your turn."

"Motherfuck," Jared swears under his breath. Jensen just smirks a little and raises an eyebrow before he's unbuttoning his jeans. They slide off easily, and Jensen's stands in front of him naked, skin smooth and golden. That same damn hand retraces its path down Jensen's stomach, sliding lower this time. By the time the fingers curl around Jensen's cock, giving one lazy pull, Jared's straining against his jeans. He reaches down to adjust himself and gets another smack on the hand.

Jensen swings a leg over him, straddling his lap, and leans forward until his lips brush against Jared's ear. "Wait," he says, a sharp nip along the lobe to punctuate, "your goddamn turn."

"I don't think I can." He can feel the heat radiating from Jensen's body, seeping into his own, making him feel flushed from the inside out.

Jensen hums at that, and he settles down on Jared's lap, just far back enough that there's the tease of pressure against Jared's dick. Both of Jensen's hands land on Jared's shoulder and begin moving slowly down his chest. "Maybe I'll just have to tie you up. Make sure you don't try to cheat."

Jared moans at that, head dropping back. Jensen takes advantage, mouth hot against Jared's throat. "Don't want to get up, though," he says, teeth scraping along the tender skin under Jared's jaw. "So behave."

He moves back and Jared nods weakly. His hands clasp behind the chair, nails digging in as Jensen leans back, strong muscles of his bare thighs flexing around Jared, keeping him in place. He licks his palm, eyes sparkling, never leaving Jared's face, not even as he wraps his hand around his dick once more.

Jared's frozen in place, afraid to move because Jensen might stop. Afraid to move because he might blink and miss the way Jensen's fingers move up and down his shaft, tan against red. Jensen rubs a thumb over his cockhead, and they both moan. Jared's cock pulses against his jeans. He wants to tear his clothes off, wants to get his hands and his mouth and his dick on Jensen, taste and smell and feel.

But he clenches his hands tighter, watches hungrily as Jensen strokes himself. Watches his muscles flex and ripple, watches the flush spread all over Jensen's body as he works himself harder, quicker. Jared can feel the tremble of Jensen's body as he gets closer, can feel his gasping breaths as if they were being torn from Jared's own lungs.

Jensen reaches out with his free hand, grabs a hold of Jared's shirt. He bites down on his lip, and Jared mirrors the action, grunting as he bites down too hard. Jensen swears at that, and with one last, drawn-out groan, he comes, spilling over his hand and onto Jared's lap. He slumps forward, rests his head on Jared's shoulder.

Jared waits a moment, lets Jensen catch his breath. Eventually, he jogs his leg a little, and Jensen looks up, eyebrows raised in fake bewilderment. "Did you need something?"

Jared growls a little, and the grin is barely back on Jensen's face before Jared lifts him up, spins them both around and deposits Jensen on the bed. Jared pulls his shirt off and crawls up to cover Jensen. He dips his head down, nosing at Jensen's cheek before whispering, "Now it's my turn."




thank you for reading!

[identity profile] nu-breed.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 07:15 am (UTC)(link)
ASLDKJF;ASLKDFJ;LASKDFJ;ASD Hotter than the SUN.

I have missed your porn SO MUCH.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 02:46 pm (UTC)(link)
heeee! Thank you, hon! I've missed *writing* porn.

[identity profile] simplybeing.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 07:17 am (UTC)(link)
Holy hell. Best damn bedtime story ever. SWEET DREAMS TONIGHT.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 02:46 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY! Thank you for reading! :D

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 02:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 07:30 am (UTC)(link)
hot like the sun and also playful and comfortable at the same time. utterly and insanely delicious. GUH GUH GUH.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 02:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, hon! Playful and comfortable is still how I see the Js. :D

[identity profile] casiedearestfic.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 07:45 am (UTC)(link)
"now it's my turn" = guh. and i typo'd that 4 times. yes really. that's how melted i am. love how you chose to use the prompt.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 03:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I had a couple of ideas of where to go with it, but this one seemed like the most fun. :D

[identity profile] latentfunction.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 08:14 am (UTC)(link)
Mmm, I just LOVE how Jensen is teasing! And Jared's frustration is awesome as well. Super hot.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 03:07 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY! Thank you for reading! :D

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 03:07 pm (UTC)(link)
\o/

[identity profile] missyjack.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 08:36 am (UTC)(link)
burning burning hot. love Jared's excellent restraint in the face of such temptation

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 04:17 pm (UTC)(link)
He really was such a good boy, wasn't he? I'm sure Jensen rewarded him well for that. :D

[identity profile] superwicked.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 12:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Hot and Sexy, just the way I like it!

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 04:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent! Thank you!

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/__tiana__/ 2010-03-12 12:44 pm (UTC)(link)
AND THAT'S WHY I TAGGED YOU. Deliciously hot, babe! ♥

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 04:19 pm (UTC)(link)
HEEE! I did have a lot of fun with the prompt, as I'm sure you figured I would. <333

[identity profile] wendy.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 12:56 pm (UTC)(link)
AHHH! I love how this all builds up to a fever pitch and I love how Jensen just teaseteaseteases and Jared TRIES To be good, and I love that once it IS Jared's turn he just TAKES control back and...ngh. Yes please!

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 05:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Jared obviously knows that good behavior is rewarded well. Jensen has him well-trained. ;D

[identity profile] essene.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 02:30 pm (UTC)(link)
UNF.

Goddamn. I think you broke me.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 05:23 pm (UTC)(link)
hee, glad you enjoyed it! :D

[identity profile] jeez-louise.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 03:07 pm (UTC)(link)
This was awesome! "Did you need something?". Heehee.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 05:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :D

[identity profile] agt-league.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 03:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh holy hell this was SUPER hot.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 05:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much!

[identity profile] scoopchick.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 03:30 pm (UTC)(link)
HOLY FUCKING JESUS ON A POGO STICK!

I've been sick in bed with NO PORN FOR DAYS. I cheated because the word count on this was less than 1000 and HOLY HOT DAMN GOOD GAWD GUH. Am I glad I did or what?

*fans self*

Jesus Christ.

God Almighty.

You've made me spontaneously blasphemous. THANK YOU!

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 07:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! Glad you liked it, and hope it made you feel a little better. :D

[identity profile] mistyzeo.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 03:47 pm (UTC)(link)
GUH. So sexy and playful and fun!

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 07:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :D
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[personal profile] chemm80 2010-03-12 04:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh! Very nice take on the prompt. Good one.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 07:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much!

[identity profile] equally-dour.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 04:32 pm (UTC)(link)
So very hot!

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 07:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] koneko-kitsune.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 05:02 pm (UTC)(link)
UNF. This is hot line burning things that burn. Hotly. And I don't know why but this line is my favorite:

"Wait," he says, a sharp nip along the lobe to punctuate, "your goddamn turn."

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 07:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm rather fond of that line, too. :D

[identity profile] amberlynne.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 05:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Nngaljkfghakldfasksa. Hot. However, my favorite part might be the impatient little leg bounce at the end. Boooooooooooooooooooooys. ♥

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 07:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Jared was good and he wants his reward NOW! XD

[identity profile] itsthedetails.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 05:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmm, hot like burning!

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 07:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, hon! :D

[identity profile] honeymull.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 07:05 pm (UTC)(link)
,jdr;gkjaehrkjhtlijehltijglkjeghlkjrt

Yes, that. OH MY GOD, HOT LIKE FIRE. Nnnnggghhhhhrr.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 07:06 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY!

(WHERE'S MY SCANDINAVIAN HOCKEY PORN?!?! ahem.)

<-- is demanding

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[identity profile] hildigunnur.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 07:23 pm (UTC)(link)
UNF indeed. So hot.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 07:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] dugindeep.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmmmm! I like that you just jump right into it. Of course I wanna see Jared's turn, too!!

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 07:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much!
osaraba: (spn save a horse)

[personal profile] osaraba 2010-03-12 09:07 pm (UTC)(link)
LOVED Jensen's teasing and Jared's utterly magnanimous restraint. Hee~! <3
Edited 2010-03-12 21:08 (UTC)

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 07:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Jared should be canonized for his restraint, really. :P

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