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[hockey rps, dan girardi/ryan callahan, pg, 232 words]

because we were watching the game against Columbus and [livejournal.com profile] antheia said, "is that a hickey on Cally's neck?" This isn't something I was supposed to write, or any of the requests, but you gotta go with what comes to you, right?



It's not until after the game is over, as they're packing up to head straight to the airport, that Dan notices it. Looks like nothing more than shadow at first, but Ryan turns his head and the flourescents hit the mark like a spotlight. High up on his neck, behind the ear, and Dan's gut twists hard, knocking the breath right out of him. He knows that spot well. Knows what the skin there tastes like, knows how it feels to scrape his teeth over it, knows the way Ryan shudders and swears when he's bitten there.

What he doesn't know is who put it there.

Ryan laughs and ducks his head, the movement hiding the mark, but the image is already burned into Dan's brain. He drops his head, tries to take a deep breath. Focuses on the ring on his finger, reminds himself that it had been his decision, his choice. It had been the right choice.

Three months now and Dan is still trying to convince himself of that. He twists the ring and thinks about his marriage, his family, his future. Shores himself up with each thought, brick by brick.

When he finally looks up, Ryan is watching him from across the room, eyes dark and familiar. He licks his lip, touches the mark on his neck, and in an instant, all of Dan's denials come tumbling down.




thank you for reading!

Date: 2008-10-27 12:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] antheia.livejournal.com
This? Still awesome. *draws hearts around Cally* Also, now I want to watch that moment again.

Date: 2008-10-27 01:05 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-10-27 01:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com
Now it's your turn. :D

Date: 2008-10-27 01:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] antheia.livejournal.com
YES IT IS.

Date: 2008-10-27 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeymvt.livejournal.com
I love that someone else realizes that Danny and Cally were meant to be together. But breaking them up just cause Danny got married? Pshaw, the wife is just a coverage up and Danny is screwing Cally on every road trip. Or at least they are in my mind ;)

I put my money on Dubinsky being the culprit behind the hickey. Dubi really like his teammates.

Date: 2008-10-27 01:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com
hahaha, oh man, if you only KNEW the ridiculous soap opera they are in my head. I mean, you and I know they belong together, and Cally sure as hell does, but Dan's a stubborn bastard. I'm sure he'll come around, though. ;D

and, yes, Dubi really really does, although I like to think that he's got his hands full of with Zherdev.

Date: 2008-10-30 03:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeymvt.livejournal.com
They are their own soap opera in your head?! I heart that like woah. SRSLY. Ever since they came up back in 07 and heard about them playing together since Juniors, my brain went "yeah, they've been screwing around since they were teenagers. It's a given" and then that interview from that spring where they were all awkward and Cally kept giving Danny these sideways glances that spoke volumes. Err, yeah, I've benn slashing them in my brain ever since then. Your soap opera doth intrigue me though....

Dubi's got his hands full of Z AND Voros. Now that is a threesome that has been rolling around my head since opening night at MSG.

Date: 2008-10-27 04:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] offside.livejournal.com
oh, fucking fabulous.

Date: 2008-10-27 01:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com
oh, thank you so much! :D

Date: 2008-10-27 06:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leici.livejournal.com
Oh man, I loved this. You say so much here with so few words. So much emotion, so many feelings, their history, where they are now, the choices they made. So wonderful.

Date: 2008-10-27 01:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com
oh, yay! Thank you so much for the kind words. Totally made my morning. :D

Date: 2008-10-27 06:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cpexplosion.livejournal.com
Woot! A Danny/Ryan fic - it's been so long since I've seen one of these o.o This just brought back memories of that interview where it's just the two of them and they keep getting awkward-ish questions from this lady about how close their 'friendship' is XD

Date: 2008-10-27 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com
I love that interview SO MUCH, it's ridiculous. I remember watching it the first time and thinking, 'does she know something I don't?' XD

Date: 2008-10-27 08:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bkm5191.livejournal.com
ohh awesome.

Date: 2008-10-27 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D

Date: 2008-10-27 04:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyaugustana.livejournal.com
Oh my god, Rangers fic!! And Danny and Cally to boot! Hee, I love it. You really have no idea how much you made my day with this. ;) Although, I must say my first thought on who's culprit behind the hickey? Stephen Gionta. Err.. yeah okay, I know.

Also, you totally just inspired me to try and write more of these boys.
Edited Date: 2008-10-27 04:41 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-10-28 02:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com
oh, yay! I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed it. and, HA. I can't say I actually had a culprit in mind, but that is an intriguing theory. ;P

Date: 2008-10-28 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glockgal.livejournal.com
Wheeee I read this last night and then dreamed about hockey boys even though I wasn't sure what these ones looked like, I just imagined them as amalgamations of all the photos/vids you showed me. WRONG? MAYBE. But I don't care, it gave me good dreams!!

Love the teeth scraping, the angst of duty and marriage and decisions and somehow this one line gives me extreme aesthetic pleasure --

Shores himself up with each thought, brick by brick.

Especially because of how it all comes tubmling down two sentences later. Just perfect. I can't believe you got so much in 232 words!!

*YAY YOU*

Date: 2008-10-29 04:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com
eeee! YAY FOR HOCKEY DREAMS! I'm so glad you liked this, hon, you have no idea. I shall make a hockey fan out of you yet! XD

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