cathybites: (walking dead)
cathybites ([personal profile] cathybites) wrote2007-02-27 07:45 pm

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lower the curtain down all right
[cw rps, jared/jensen, pg, 1000 words]

for [livejournal.com profile] picfor1000, inspired by this picture. title from "Under the Milky Way" by The Church. much love to my darling [livejournal.com profile] cosmic for her beta fu. and much much love to [livejournal.com profile] slodwick for running this challenge.



So. This is how it goes.

You're young, you're hot, you're the star of a hit TV show. You've got a smoking little minx of a girlfriend, and when she's not around, you get to fuck your equally hot co-star. The money's rolling in, word's being spread around that you're 'one to watch', and the other week your dad called to say he was proud of you.

All in all, life is good.

Then all these people start getting sick. They get sick and they die, one right after another, falling down like dominoes. The health department goes nuts trying to pinpoint the source, and in the meantime, the bodies pile up, so many of them that the government has to come in and truck them out, dump them at some quarantined site out in the wilderness.

It happens BAM BAM BAM, two days and it's done. You reassure your parents that you're fine, you're healthy, no one you know died. Which isn't completely true, but your mom doesn't need to know about the PA or the lighting guy you hardly ever saw. It's nothing you worry about, not when they cancel shooting for the week and you spend it in bed with that hot co-star of yours.

You don't tell her about that, either, or the rumors that some of those people, those dead sick people with the skin falling off them, aren't completely dead, and that some of them crawled out of that mass grave up in the mountains. You don't tell her because you're not concerned about it, not at all, not with Jensen to distract you from the cold fear gnawing at your brain.

Three days into your unexpected vacation and you're sitting on your bed, hollering for Jensen to hurry up with the beer. Movie's in the player, ready to go, and he comes into your room, no beer in sight, and tells you to turn on the news.

Bullshit. That's the first thought clanging like a bell in your head, with oh god hot on its tail.

Then one moment you're watching the world fall to pieces, the next your dogs are howling their heads off, and you hear something coming up the stairs.

Fast.

Your heart seizes up in your chest, and you choke out their names, running to the door, and Jensen shoves you out of the way, slamming the door shut just as something hits it from the other side. He's hollering at you - block the door, something to block the door! - but all you can think about is your dogs, the way Sadie flopped across your feet, the way Harley slobbered all over you. Your mind stutters on the picture of them in your head and you can't think of anything else. Not your friends, not your family, not that hot girlfriend of yours. Just the dogs.

Jensen's still screaming your name and you finally snap into action. Maybe you're nothing but a pretty-boy actor on a joke of a network, but all the running and training you have to do for the show serves some purpose. Adrenaline courses like whitewater through your veins and you push and shove your dresser into place. Slump against it and breathe in the moment's peace and quiet.

The second the pounding starts, though, you're about ready to piss yourself. You and Jensen stare at one another, then scramble looking for a weapon. He finds a baseball bat, and you're stuck with a two-hundred-dollar nine-iron that you've used maybe once. You take one look at the two of you, and the sound that comes out is less laughter and more the stark black realization that you're fucked.

The door starts to splinter and you can't remember who moves first, but you and Jensen push each other towards the balcony, and how the both of you manage to jump off without breaking anything, you'll never understand, but it doesn't matter because you hit the ground, you get up, and you run. You run and thank whatever deity hasn't abandoned you that your keys are in your pocket as you and Jen get in your truck.

Out of the corner of your eye, you can see bright scarlet splashed on the wall of your neighbor's house.

When you pull out of the driveway, your dogs come bounding out and you nearly burst into tears, right then and there, male pride be damned. You want to stop, you want to get out and gather them up, but Jensen tells you to keep driving, that they'll be fine, just go go go! And you do because you can see something coming out of the door of your place, and something coming around the corner of the building across the street. They shuffle past your dogs, uninterested, heading for your truck, and you pray that Sadie and Harley understand as you floor it.

The streets are chaos, broken bodies and burning cars scattered across the pavement, and you don't even think, just keep driving and driving until the ocean stretches before you. You entertain the thought of finding a boat and getting away, but the air surrounding the docks are thick with smoke and screams, flashes of fire and gunshots flickering through the haze, and so you keep going, straight up the coast.

When the deep blue-black of night finally comes crashing down, you pull over. The radio's been playing nothing but static for hours; up and down the coast, you see fires still blazing in the dark, people scrambling for safety, people fighting, living, dying.

Jensen stirs next to you, fingers drumming against the dash. The memory of those fingers from a day before assaults you, pounds into your head until you're laughing, great long gasps of hysteria that shudder to a standstill when Jensen pulls you to him, low and whispered promises that you're fine, you're okay, everything will be fine, and you think, you laugh and sob and hope to God that he's right.




thank you for reading!
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[identity profile] schneestern.livejournal.com 2007-02-28 12:54 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow! *flappy hands* This was awesome and wonderful and pretty damn scary! *shudders* You even made me like second person with this one.
I love how you characterize Jared with just a short paragraph and then proceed with the zombie action and WHOA! Just scary and uhm kinda cool actually...

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:11 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, hon! I know that a lot of people don't like second-person, but it just seemed the most effective way to tell this story, and I'm so glad that you dug it anyways. :D

[identity profile] affectingly.livejournal.com 2007-02-28 12:55 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow, Cathy! That was intense and dramatic and scary. I really liked it.

But, now I need to go read about Jared and Jensen fucking and not think about them getting eaten by Zombies or else I'm gonna have nightmares. :O

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:11 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! and, hey, if it makes you feel better, in my head they totally escape the zombies and fuck each other silly to celebrate. :D

[identity profile] ink-stain.livejournal.com 2007-02-28 01:09 am (UTC)(link)
cathy omg i want to marry this. and you. you do that undercurrent of creepy so well, baby, you always have. <3

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:12 am (UTC)(link)
oh, yay yay yay! thank you so much, baby. *mwah*

[identity profile] cosmic.livejournal.com 2007-02-28 01:12 am (UTC)(link)
Like I already said, I love this. I always done well done 2nd person narrative with a passion, because it can give such a sense of urgency. This story is just perfect because of that.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:13 am (UTC)(link)
I'm a big fan of well-done second-person, too, and it just seemed to be the best choice for this story.

*lovesyou*

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_audrey/ 2007-02-28 01:18 am (UTC)(link)
ASFJ:LS:KAKZWAGGAGHGJSHJKL ZOMBIES

I love that this has a definite Shaun of the Dead feel (although way more unsettling and damn scary than hilarious), and the pace it moves along at just felt really right. Plus, CANADIAN ZOMBIE APOCALYPSE.

If this was a full-length fic I think I'd be too much of a baby to actually read it, and I like zombies. I think this means you win.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:14 am (UTC)(link)
YAY! Thank you so much. I think horror is one of the toughest genres to write, and I'm so glad to hear that it works for you. :D
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[identity profile] castiel.livejournal.com 2007-02-28 01:31 am (UTC)(link)
OH MY GOD, THIS WAS SCARY. SERIOUSLY. MY HEART IS FUCKING RACING. I love this. Seriously fucking LOVE this. You wrote it so perfectly that it really is genuinely terrifying. I've got cold chills going down my back, and I gotta say, I think this was more frightening than Dawn of the Dead. Granted, that isn't exactly the greatest example to base that off of, but YOU GET WHAT I MEAN.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:17 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so so much, hon! and, dude, Dawn of the Dead is a GREAT example, at least the original because that was one of the inspirations I had playing in the back of my head while writing this. :D
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[personal profile] cynjen 2007-02-28 01:42 am (UTC)(link)
28 Days Later! With J/J! Dude. Great stuff, so atmospheric.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:17 am (UTC)(link)
YAY! Thank you, hon. :D

[identity profile] obeetaybee.livejournal.com 2007-02-28 02:18 am (UTC)(link)
Wow! You packed quite an emotional punch in this 1000 word fic.

And ZOMBIES!! Yay for zombies! And yay for Jensen and Jared being okay at the end of this!

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:19 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I was afraid that I wouldn't be able to convey everything I wanted in only 1000 words, so I'm thrilled to hear you felt it had an emotional punch. :D

[identity profile] loveflyfree.livejournal.com 2007-02-28 04:07 am (UTC)(link)
holy shit. I love this! so scary and just. *flailz*

my only complaint is that there isn't more. :)

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:19 am (UTC)(link)
yay! *MWAH*

and, dude. you know I could've gone places with this. :D

[identity profile] sapporonoodles.livejournal.com 2007-02-28 08:38 am (UTC)(link)
oh man, i am in love. this fandom needs more zombies. seriously. like, ten times more zombies. this fic, short as it is, is all i've ever really wanted. <3 <3 eengh, omg. no words.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:20 am (UTC)(link)
hee, YES. more zombies! thank you so much for reading and enjoying! :D

[identity profile] pushingyouaway.livejournal.com 2007-02-28 02:58 pm (UTC)(link)
...

*blink*


wow. so much in so little words... i'm...amazed o_O

*gives you tons of cookies*

ohemgeethankgodtheyreokay

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:20 am (UTC)(link)
YAY COOKIES! :D

Thank you so so much.

[identity profile] shutyourface.livejournal.com 2007-02-28 07:46 pm (UTC)(link)
I hate you. I hateyouIhateyouIhateyou. I fucking hate zombies and dead things that don't stay dead and want to make everyone else dead like them and I hate that you put Jared and Jensen in that world and I hatehateHATE that I know I'm going to have nightmares about this.

You suck.

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[identity profile] aknutzen.livejournal.com 2007-02-28 08:51 pm (UTC)(link)
*bounces*
i loved it really really loved it!
I have a thing for zombies and j2(of course) and then u go and put them together and now i'm just about the happiest person... *Blushs* sorry i'll calm down.
*grins*
are u gonna write more in this 'verse?
please!!!!!!!!!

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:22 am (UTC)(link)
hee! no worries! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the story so much.

and I can't make any promises that there'll be sequels or whathaveyou, but you never know. :D

[identity profile] queen-geek.livejournal.com 2007-02-28 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
AIEEEEE. This is pure, solid gold, every word of it.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:23 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you for saying so! :D

[identity profile] nova-berry.livejournal.com 2007-02-28 10:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Jensen pulls you to him, low and whispered promises that you're fine, you're okay, everything will be fine, and you think, you laugh and sob and hope to God that he's right.

oh, baby boy! I love this so much, loved Jared's denialdenialdeni- OH crap, this is happening!

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
oh, yay! Thank you! I'm very glad to hear you enjoyed it. :D

[identity profile] estrella30.livejournal.com 2007-03-01 01:51 am (UTC)(link)
oh, baby, this is AWESOME. and seemed like you got WAY more than 1000 words into it.

damn! freaking terrific!!

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:27 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, hon! yay! :D
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[identity profile] steelknight.livejournal.com 2007-03-01 04:46 am (UTC)(link)
That was Amazing!!! Very well done, I'd love it if you wrote more of this!

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:27 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! I can't say if there will be more or not, but you never know. :D

[identity profile] elmathelas.livejournal.com 2007-03-01 05:36 am (UTC)(link)
It's funny how a story that contains the unbelievable is emminently believable when the story is about the human aspects of responding to the monster rather than the monster itself. Very well done.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
oh, thank you! I agree completely and I'm thrilled to hear you felt my story, in spite of the z-word, was still believable. :D

[identity profile] somersaulter.livejournal.com 2007-03-01 05:42 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow. Just wow. This is amazing.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:30 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! :D

[identity profile] kickthebeat.livejournal.com 2007-03-01 10:12 am (UTC)(link)
zombies + puppies who are NOT yet zombies! i think i love you.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:30 am (UTC)(link)
hee! YAY! I'm glad you enjoyed, hon. :D

[identity profile] xingou.livejournal.com 2007-03-01 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, Jesus. That is so not what I was expecting.

::shudder::

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:31 am (UTC)(link)
Nobody expects the zombie inquisition!!!

...or something.

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[identity profile] anakin415.livejournal.com 2007-03-04 02:13 am (UTC)(link)
wow

I was scared for them & the pups

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-05 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
oh yay!

er, not for scaring you, exactly, but, well. I'm sure you get it. :D
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[personal profile] stormcloude 2007-03-04 08:33 am (UTC)(link)
*shivers* Okay, that's pretty creepy. Like Romero creepy. *shivers more*

I'm glad the dogs will be okay though.

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-05 03:42 am (UTC)(link)
oh, thank you! I'm a huge fan of Romero, so that is such a great compliment. :D

and, yeah. I just couldn't hurt the pups. I'm too much of a softie.
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[personal profile] celli 2007-03-05 04:35 am (UTC)(link)
I...should not have read this just before bed.

*chews nails*

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-08 12:38 am (UTC)(link)
Does it make me a bad person that I read this comment and was all, 'YAY!'? possibly, yes? :D
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[personal profile] embroiderama 2007-03-07 02:35 am (UTC)(link)
*worried face* This was just incredible--so intense, but coming out of nowhere with the casual tone and just--eeeeek!

[identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com 2007-03-08 12:39 am (UTC)(link)
oh, thank you so much! I wasn't sure if this style would work, so I'm glad to hear the intensity came through. :D

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